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Susan

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               Huntress' Manor, Nevada, United States, 1:54 pm.
       Inside the large manor belonging to the round performer Huntress, fhere exist a multitude of rooms. Including Five interlinking bedrooms. One belongs to Huntress herself, one to Susan, one to Fubuki, one to Sabrina, and One belonging to Ryu, for when she decides to stay at her mothers. In Susan's room, The fox girl was trying on a new outfit. A red dress shirt with grey sleeves, and a breast window. She also had on a grey knee high skirt. She was having a small problem though. She couldn't get her collar right due to her chain. She looked at the chain.
       'Gomene, Ka-san.' She removed the chain and pulled up her collar, then put a tie around her neck. Her tails stood up behind her as she admired herself in the mirror. 'Kawaii!' She walked over to what she believed was her room door, only to walk into a wall. She backed away and held her head. 'Ite!' She looked at the wall and found her sight to be blurry. 'Eh? Naze watashi wa miru koto wa dekimasen?!' She got up, and felt her way to the door, after opening it, she appearently knocked someone over, due to her hearing an "oof". 'Nani?'
       "Susan-chan, watch were your going." All Susan could see was a patch of black and a patch of purple.
       "Sabrina-chan, Fubuki Ne-san?" She reached for the two patches and began feeling them, feeling soft flab underneath clothing. The purple patch began to grow red at the top.
       "Ugh, Susan-Chan, this is a little sudden....!" Susan grew confused till she realised she was grabbing Sabrina and Fubuki's stomachs. She retracted her hands instantly.
       "Gomene! I can't see that well right now!" The black patch moved closer to Susan, then pulled her up next to her. 
       "Sabrina, go tell Mom im taking Susan to the optometrist." Sabrina nodded then ran to find Huntress. Fubuki guided Susan to the driveway and put her in the passenger side of her convertible. She got in the drivers side and started the car, pulled out of the driveway, then drove towards town. "Was there a specific point when you couldn't really see today?"
       "........Yeah, I was admiring myself in the mirror, then I ended up walking into a wall absentmindedly......."
       "You probably got some dust in your eyes. I've been hearing you up late at night though. You wouldn't happen to be reading at night would you? Reading in the dark is what damaged my eyes when I was younger......"
       "Yeah...... I was up reading manga every night for the past few months........."
       "I'm guessing the dust getting in your eyes was the final step till they were damaged......." The convertible pulled into the small nearby town, turned down a right corner, and stopped infront of a small building at the front of a large set of stores. Fubuki got Susan out from her side and walked her into the building, finding a woman behind a small desk typing on a computer.
        "Ah Miss Eradicator! Pleasure to see you! Here for an appointment?"
        "Actually, My sister Susan is having problems seeing, so I wanted to know if Dr. Turner could examine and prescribe some glasses for Susan...." The woman began typing on her computer.
        "You are in luck. Dr. Turner doesn't have another appointment till 4:00 pm." She clicked a button on her intercom and spoke into it. "Dr. Turner, there is a patient here to see you."
        "Hmmm...... Send em in." She released the button and Fubuki walked with Susan to the Doctors door. She opened the door to find a middle aged man with brown hair in a ponytail, wearing a doctors uniform. He looked up and beamed at Fubuki. "Ah. Fubuki-san, sit on your glasses again?"
      "No Dr. Turner. My little sister Susan has been having trouble seeing. She told me she's been up late at night reading manga in the dark for the past few mon-"
       "Say no more." He pulled out a tiny flashlight and guided Susan to a chair. He turned the light on and shone it in her eyes. "Hmm....... hmmm....." He turned the light off, then placed a large viewer in front of Susan's eyes. "Now Susan, can you tell me which is easier to see? Number 1," He turned a dial on the side. "Or number 2?"
        "Number 1 is blurrier. Number 2 is easier to see." The doctor turned the dial again.
        "Number 5, or Number 6?"
        "Number 5." The doctor pulled out a notepad and began writing notes.
        "Fubuki-san, I'm going to need a few minutes. If you would like, you can take a seat over by the door and read one of the magazines." Fubuki nodded and began to wedge herself into the small chair, with an obvious amount of uncomfortability. Ignoring it, she grabbed a magazine and began flipping through.
30 Minutes Later
        After several different tests, Dr. Turner came to a single conclusion.
        "Well Susan, it appears you are far sighted. Reading in the dark for so long has made it harder for your eyes to see closer. It is my recommendation that you start wearing glasses." He wrote a small script on his prescription pad, then walked over to Fubuki. He nudged her, getting her attention from the magazine. "Hand this script to Elaine, she'll send it to rush delivery. You should receive Susan's glasses tomorrow by noon."
       "Arigatou, Dr. Turner." Fubuki wedged herself out of the seat, guided Susan to the lobby, handed the script to Elaine, then left with Susan.
      Huntress' Manor, The Next Day, 11:58 am
    Ryu was in the large kitchen digging through pantries, looking for something important.
    "Come on! Where the frig are they? Someone better not have eaten my Chocolate!!" She heard someone come in licking their fingers. She turned to see Sabrina licking what appeared to be chocolate off her fingers. Ryu began to glare daggers causing Sabrina to look frightened. She tried to turn around but Ryu threw her hat at her, distracting her long enough to allow Ryu to tackle her to the ground. "You ate my chocolate!?"
    "I needed a snack and the chocolate was right there! It wasnt even that good!" The two began rolling around while sorta wrestling.
    "Do you know how much that stuff cost me?! It cost me $50! It was to taste like a bite of heaven!"
    "I'm telling you ya got ripped off!"
    "That's not the point! You don't eat my chocolate without asking!!" The two ended up crashing into the bedroom doors, Just as Fubuki opened up her door, knocking her over. Soon, all three of them were in a pile, knocked out. Huntress opened up her own door and walked out to find her daughters knocked out. She smiled, walked past them and went into the kitchen to find a now awake Melissa preparing lunch.
     "Good morning Melissa-chan! Getting lunch ready I see! Mind If I get some milk with it?" Melissa turned to her and nervously bowed.
     "Yes Huntress-Sama!" Huntress laughed and made Melissa look at her.
     "Relax Melissa-chan, you don't need to be so formal. Call me Huntress. You could also call me Mama if you want." Melissa gleamed and smiled.
     "Thank you Mama!" She turned to a cabinet and pulled a glass out, activated her milk buster on low power, and poured the milk into the glass. She then resumed making lunch as Huntress heard a knock at the door. She walked over to the door to find a delivery man holding a small box.
      "Hello, I'm here to deliver a package for a Ms. Susan Yao. I need a signature." 
      "I can sign for her." She took the clip pad and signed her name. The delivery man handed Huntress the box.
     "So.. you her older sister or something?"
     "Actually I'm her adoptive mother."
     "Wow, you are awfully young to be a mother."
     "Oh stop, you're making me blush!" The two shared a laugh.
     "Well, thank you for the signature." With that the delivery man left and Huntress closed the door. Huntress walked over to Susan's door and knocked.
     "Susan-chan?! You awake?" She opened the door to find Susan admiring herself in the mirror from afar again. "Susan-chan." Susan yelped in suprise and turned to see a large blue blur. "A small box came for you in the mail." Susan smiled and ran to the box, then tore it open and felt for its contents. Inside was a pair of glasses. She put them on her face and now could clearly see Huntress.
      "Yatta! I can see now!"
      "I didn't know you needed glasses. They do look cute on you though." Susan's tails all began wagging as she blushed.
      "Arigatou Kaa-chan!"
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And now the updated form of my Kitsune OC Susan Yao! Note that this is the typical morning in the Huntress manor. This magnificent piece of art was made by :iconinkblot123: via commission! Check him out! He makes amazing TF art and evens dabbles in expansion! Plus his prices are perfect for amazing work like this! He even does TF Sequences! So instead of listening to my rambling right now, check him out! Susan, Melissa,  Fubuki, Sabrina, Huntress, Ryu, and the other chars in this are all mine IE :iconyuto54:, :iconyuto54:,:iconyuto54: The excerpt written is also by me!
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She's adorable!! I love the story~